I've been following Burrows for about 2 years now and man.... this VN is smthn special. Have never been disappointed by any updates. They all bring the sauce. Especially after this new update. I gotta say Kens route is an absolute masterpiece. Very heavy yet beautiful and everything has its place. Love how deep the writers are willing to go.
Every route is 100% worth the read. Marks route has a lot of unnerving & memorable moments, Gabriels's route surprised me this past update, and Hiros route is starting to come together, and I love its setting. I enjoyed all of them and they're super different. And it all looks great too. Art reminds me of a fresh clean newly waxed car 👌 the music is memorable af too
And THE SIDE STORIES!!! Bro don't get me started. Some of those are works of art. Especially the Path. I don't cry often, and I never thought I'd cry reading a FVN but I shed a few tears reading that one.
Even more, this VN talks about some real deep shit at times and its done super well. Had to pause sometimes for 5 min to think or revaluate my perspective on smthn like: "Huh....I never considered it like that" or "That's a very real issue ppl go through and don't talk enough about". Might be reading too much into it, but it makes this VN that much more special and alive. Had me in the feels at times even after reading ngl.
Haven't been the same after reading through Burrows. If you don't mind horror this is a gem you shouldn't skip.
im a bit disappointed in Grey our MC that he was with an older woman back in his young past if i remember correctly in Ken’s route. So that old woman was a pedo or some sort if she’s with Grey .back when he was 15
well. If i remember correctly he was also like kinda into it and doing it with another man too. So yeah that’s why i dissapointed. If i remember correctly
okay. After some heavy research now about what grooming is now. I now realized that i have been wrong and blamed it on our MC for no reason at all. I would like to apologize for that and will take heavy research on the things i may have not dig deep too next time
I can't get the new update to work with my previous saves. A huge page full of error texts pops up and I don't know what to do. I tried launching the old version of the game and it loads the saves just fine, just not in the new version. Is there a way to fix this?
Ken's update broke me, it all started with Michelle's tattoo and then the tapes, god those tapes broke me, I couldn't stop crying, poor Ken I just wanted everything to stop and just hug him, Nikko you are a genius at writing and the atmosphere of your VN is spectacular, I think this update hurt me more because I have a cousin who also suffered sexual abuse, and I felt the same when she told me, that helplessness of not being able to do anything, that anger and pain, anyway you are a genius Nikko and I love Ken.
Sorry for my englihs i use Google traductor, i'm from argentina 💜
i dont get it in kens route we have so many odd balls and yet i relate to all of them to some degree and its the kinda stuff ive had issues putting into words hows he do that
okay soooo I played the game (currently on mark's route ATM ) but I gotta say I absolutely love it and how vastly different it is with each route.. I especially loved Gabe (I can't wait to see him possibly top the mc in the future) I like that out of all the characters in each route, Gabe seemed to be the one who understood the most about Grey's and his situation (IMO). Also loved Jessie and Colt. The horror is Veryyyyy good...... And Virgil is hot (I hope we get to do something with him even if it's a hallucination)
hey Nikko, you know the sprites for Michelle in the saucy lingerie? yeah, she has three hands in them; the two hands connected to her arms plus a third floating in her hip
Zeppelins are mentioned in Mark's story line, which could hint @ Hiro's, & in Gabriel's a character mentions "The Empire Incident" hinting @ Mark's story line. I TRULY hope all 4 timelines reconverge at some point!!!
One of the most well written (and definitely the one with the best artwork/designs) fvn i have played! it's definitely not for everyone because of its heavy themes (only played mark/ken for now so idk about the other two) Is there any way to see how far % each route is to be finished?
To think I kept putting off playing this game because I have a hate boner for pre computer era. WOW this game is horrifying and delightful at the same time. so much wow I wont spoil it for anyone, just wow wow wow dont play it late at night.
So I've gotten into to Hiro's route and I'll admit I'm a bit confused on how I feel. Now I want to start by saying that I love the idea of a trans character in a fvn. But my main issue comes with Grey sexualilty? Is he gay or bisexual as it seems like Hiro still has female bits?
What's this? A shark character in an anthro VN? That's not an animal that we see everyday. Is he dateable? Also, is this horror? If so, color me interested!
Hello! I was wondering if burrows had any EULA or guidelines for modding, as I wouldn't want to infringe upon any copywrite laws or things developers didn't want people to do. I'm not looking to make a whole new game, but to just make an addition. The base game would still be required to run the mod.
One question! Would you translate the VN into other languages once it is finished or in one of the updates? I would love it if this wonderful game was fully translated into Portuguese! And I absolutely love this VN, and I'm looking forward to the next updates!
on ken's route, i was really amazed when the game suddenly went full portuguese, i was reading like something was wrong and only then i saw what was happening! i just kinda wished it was a tad little less formal, cause even if it was my main language, i struggled a bit on reading those. not the dream, i know it was supposed to be like that, but the red room stuff. other than that, great stuff! i'm already halfway through the whole game, leaving mark's route last. excited for future updates!
damnnnnnn! thanks for the maths there, 3 years is a lot, but this project deserves that time, at this point this isnt even a project, its a master piece. take as long as you need! @nikko and the team ;)
I am hoping Nikko finishes the project. Since I joined this site in 2020, I have played 75+ VNs and only 4 were ever completed. More than 80% have been abandoned by unprofessional creators who couldn't commit to finish the project before starting another, or disappearing altogether.
He is Chicano culturally, but identifies as a Mexican American and would be a self-described American (born in the states) vs his mother (born in Mexico)
damnnnnn, the dialogue is so good, the part with ken and grey on the pool, nahhhh, absolute cinema. @nikko did you write all this stuff, how do you get the inspo and all that, its amazing, not only is it a poem, its a dialogue between two people, deeper than my love for ice cream, i need to know who writes the dialogues, where can i find the whole team involved in this?
I haven't been able to unlock the 3rd and 5th CG on Mark's page 8 also
I think it's a glitch
I surmised that these CGs are: Mark and Grey kissing in the elevator, and Mark giving Grey a blowjob (bloody version where you failed the time event during the monster attack)
I found 3rd CG on page 8, it finally worked when you pick "go see mark" while talking with Simone, and I skipped exploring the room, and as last choice while running from monster choose "Let him take over"
Forewarning: English isn't my first language, so I might make some spelling/grammar mistakes in English.
Very mild spoilers ahead, but its mainly about grammar.
It's nothing big, but I noticed a slight grammatical error in the beginning of Hiro's route. When the two unnamed german scientits speak, they say "Ha-ha! Hoffentlich er nicht explodiert wieder vor meinem gesicht", which gets the meaning across, but the proper way to say that would be to switch "explodiert" and "er nicht", to make the sentence "Ha-ha! Hoffentlich explodiert er nicht wieder vor meinem gesicht". The difference being the first one is a word for word literal translation, and the second one being adjusted for German grammar, as German grammar writes the verb before the subject. ill update this comment as I progress through his story with other German grammar errors.
Error 2: When Hiro says "Wenn Sie nicht gehen, ich werfe Sie raus". while the sentence is technically correct (for the most part, the same error of subject-verb switching happened at the end again), it translates to "When you don't go, ill Throw you out", which I guess could be the desired meaning, but I think its more common to say "If you don't go, ill Throw you out", which would be better communicated if he said something like "Falls Sie nich gehen, werfe ich Sie raus"
Error 3: When Hiro says "Mist! I-Ich Entschuldigung". This is once again a direct, word for word translation, which doesn't quite work the same in german. in German you don't say "im sorry"(at least not like that, the best way to say that would be "tut mir leid", which translates more to "causes me suffering"). you could say "sorry", or "sorry for me", which translate to "Entschuldigung" and "Entschuldigen Sie mich". the proper way to say what hes trying to say in this context would be either "Mist! Entschuldigung!", or "Mist! Tut mir leid". Either one would work fine in this context.
Error 4: When Hiro says "Was verdammt Sie machen hier, Herr Ratte?", which I assume is meant to translate to "What the fuck are you doing here, Mr. Rat?". outside of the same "subject-to-verb switching" error, the only other one would be that verdammt isnt used like that, a better substitution would be "um Teufels willen", which is a much more common phrase, meant to mean "by Devils will", similar to "um Gottes willen", which meant "by Gods will" (similar to the english phrases "what in gods name"). A better way to say what Hiro said would then be "Was, um (Teufels/Gottes) willen machen Sie hier, Herr Ratte?"
Error 5: When Hiro says "Ich muss sein negativ geladen. Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschluss den ganze Motor", which would be as if you said "I charged negatively must be. when I touch cables, short circuits the entire motor". Germans do a similar thing with descriptors, where the descriptors go before the noun. Anyways, the correct way to say the first sentence would be to say "Ich muss negativ geladen sein". The second one is a bit more tricky, as it does make sense, but isnt optimal. Theres two waiys to say that when he touches cabl;es, the motor short-circuits, Nr. 1 being "Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschluss ich den ganzen motor", which implies its his action to short cuircut the motors, and Nr. 2, "Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschlusst der ganze Motor", which would imply that it just kinda happens without his intention. id reccomend Nr. 2, giving us a final phrase of "Ich muss negativ geladen sein. Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschlusst der ganze Motor"
Error 6: When Hiro says "Auch wenn ich umdrehe Ladung, Kabel hat noch Elektrizität. Sie sind positiv geladen, Sie keiegen Schock nächster". The same mistake of putting the noun second is present in the first sentence, the sentence should be "Auch wenn ich die Ladung umdrehe, das Kabel hat noch Elektrizität". the second sentence is perfectly fine as far as i can tell, so the complete sentence would be "Auch wenn ich die Ladung umdrehe, das Kabel hat noch Elektrizität. Sie sind positiv geladen, Sie keiegen Schock nächster".
Error 7: When the Worker says "Der Chef sollte halt nicht versuchen, uns durch welche von seiner Art zu unterbieten". To be completely honest, I couldnt understand the second part of the sentence at all, and had to use google translate to understand it. Apparently its meant to mean that "The boss should not try to undercut us with some of his kind", which would be much better written by writing "Der Chef sollte halt nicht versuchen, uns durch seine sorte zu ersetzen".
That's all the ones I could find so far. I'm realizing now it might well just be a writing style choice to have Hiro make mistakes in German, but this doesn't feel like the type of mistakes someone would intentionally write into a characters speech. if I'm wrong, please let me know!
Hello! The choices to make hiro's German stilted/awkward were intentional. Not sure about the worker's speech, I had a few german speakers look at it and they helped make it sound antiquated.
Alrighty! Fantastic attention to detail in that case! There's also a solid chance that anything from the Workers that I marked as an "Error" could just be due to the difference in time period, or maybe even my own misunderstanding.
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Out of all the routes ken's just hits different 💜😭
I've been following Burrows for about 2 years now and man.... this VN is smthn special. Have never been disappointed by any updates. They all bring the sauce. Especially after this new update. I gotta say Kens route is an absolute masterpiece. Very heavy yet beautiful and everything has its place. Love how deep the writers are willing to go.
Every route is 100% worth the read. Marks route has a lot of unnerving & memorable moments, Gabriels's route surprised me this past update, and Hiros route is starting to come together, and I love its setting. I enjoyed all of them and they're super different. And it all looks great too. Art reminds me of a fresh clean newly waxed car 👌 the music is memorable af too
And THE SIDE STORIES!!! Bro don't get me started. Some of those are works of art. Especially the Path. I don't cry often, and I never thought I'd cry reading a FVN but I shed a few tears reading that one.
Even more, this VN talks about some real deep shit at times and its done super well. Had to pause sometimes for 5 min to think or revaluate my perspective on smthn like: "Huh....I never considered it like that" or "That's a very real issue ppl go through and don't talk enough about". Might be reading too much into it, but it makes this VN that much more special and alive. Had me in the feels at times even after reading ngl.
Haven't been the same after reading through Burrows. If you don't mind horror this is a gem you shouldn't skip.
im a bit disappointed in Grey our MC that he was with an older woman back in his young past if i remember correctly in Ken’s route. So that old woman was a pedo or some sort if she’s with Grey .back when he was 15
You're... disappointed in him because he was groomed?
well. If i remember correctly he was also like kinda into it and doing it with another man too. So yeah that’s why i dissapointed. If i remember correctly
I don't think you understand what grooming is or how it works if you're putting the blame on the victim lmao. please improve your media literacy.
okay. After some heavy research now about what grooming is now. I now realized that i have been wrong and blamed it on our MC for no reason at all. I would like to apologize for that and will take heavy research on the things i may have not dig deep too next time
That you admitted that and learned from the experience is a net positive. Props to you.
OMG KEN ROUTE AND IM LATE IVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG
I can't get the new update to work with my previous saves. A huge page full of error texts pops up and I don't know what to do. I tried launching the old version of the game and it loads the saves just fine, just not in the new version. Is there a way to fix this?
This is a normal issue with RenPy based games that are in active development, and there isn't a solution.
The error comes from a conflict between the version of RenPy used for the old save, and the new version used in the new update.
I can't get CG 6 pg 10 and CG 1 pg 11, I dunno what I'm doing wrong
Will mark's route get updated after ken's?
I hope
Ken's update broke me, it all started with Michelle's tattoo and then the tapes, god those tapes broke me, I couldn't stop crying, poor Ken I just wanted everything to stop and just hug him, Nikko you are a genius at writing and the atmosphere of your VN is spectacular, I think this update hurt me more because I have a cousin who also suffered sexual abuse, and I felt the same when she told me, that helplessness of not being able to do anything, that anger and pain, anyway you are a genius Nikko and I love Ken.
Sorry for my englihs i use Google traductor, i'm from argentina 💜
I JUST FINISHED KENS UPDATE AND IT WAS INSANE JRIJEFEJF2IJFHEGKHERIGF
This game is incredible I've played every route so far. Ken my beloved
i dont get it in kens route we have so many odd balls and yet i relate to all of them to some degree and its the kinda stuff ive had issues putting into words hows he do that
(slight spoilers ...maybe idk)
okay soooo I played the game (currently on mark's route ATM ) but I gotta say I absolutely love it and how vastly different it is with each route.. I especially loved Gabe (I can't wait to see him possibly top the mc in the future) I like that out of all the characters in each route, Gabe seemed to be the one who understood the most about Grey's and his situation (IMO). Also loved Jessie and Colt. The horror is Veryyyyy good...... And Virgil is hot (I hope we get to do something with him even if it's a hallucination)
add a segment about making meth yo it will be the shit yo
missing fragment 39
and CG Ken route pg 22-1
hey Nikko, you know the sprites for Michelle in the saucy lingerie? yeah, she has three hands in them; the two hands connected to her arms plus a third floating in her hip
KEN UPDAAAATEEEEEEE WOOOOOO :333
WOOOOOO! YEAH! :333
I KNOOOW RIGHTTT god I love this VN
ohhhhh shoot!!!
SHARK
hi rukai!!!!!
ken my beloved :3
So real :3
KEN UPDATE KEN UPDATE RAHHHHHHHHHH
(Spoilers)
Zeppelins are mentioned in Mark's story line, which could hint @ Hiro's, & in Gabriel's a character mentions "The Empire Incident" hinting @ Mark's story line. I TRULY hope all 4 timelines reconverge at some point!!!
Just waiting for Ken's update 😈
One of the most well written (and definitely the one with the best artwork/designs) fvn i have played! it's definitely not for everyone because of its heavy themes (only played mark/ken for now so idk about the other two)
Is there any way to see how far % each route is to be finished?
To think I kept putting off playing this game because I have a hate boner for pre computer era. WOW this game is horrifying and delightful at the same time. so much wow I wont spoil it for anyone, just wow wow wow dont play it late at night.
I can’t be the only one who wants to get down with Virgil lmao he is so prettyyyy
I'm reporting you
-Yolanda Triangle
I was ready to risk it all when I saw his fkn dick on my screen lol
I have a question about the games soundtrack. Are the songs free to use? (like for animatics or any animations)
I was thinking of using one of the songs for an animatic but i wanted to make sure that its okay with the creator first.
(I really love the soundtrack btw)
you can use the songs so long as you give credit
ok thank you :3
Spoilers!
So I've gotten into to Hiro's route and I'll admit I'm a bit confused on how I feel. Now I want to start by saying that I love the idea of a trans character in a fvn. But my main issue comes with Grey sexualilty? Is he gay or bisexual as it seems like Hiro still has female bits?
Grey is a Pansexual
Ahhhh thank you! I was foolishly thinking he was gay lol
When will we have the continuation of Ken's route added? I love he
Ken's route will be next, you can follow Nikko on twitter, bsky, and on the discord for future updates!
What's this? A shark character in an anthro VN? That's not an animal that we see everyday. Is he dateable? Also, is this horror? If so, color me interested!
Yes and yes!
Nice! Always like a mystery/horror story. And thanks for including sharks! We (or me specifically) could use more of them :3
Will mark's route be updated in the next update?
No
Oh, alright
Hello! I was wondering if burrows had any EULA or guidelines for modding, as I wouldn't want to infringe upon any copywrite laws or things developers didn't want people to do. I'm not looking to make a whole new game, but to just make an addition. The base game would still be required to run the mod.
I would prefer if you didn't.
One question! Would you translate the VN into other languages once it is finished or in one of the updates? I would love it if this wonderful game was fully translated into Portuguese! And I absolutely love this VN, and I'm looking forward to the next updates!
mild spoilers!
on ken's route, i was really amazed when the game suddenly went full portuguese, i was reading like something was wrong and only then i saw what was happening! i just kinda wished it was a tad little less formal, cause even if it was my main language, i struggled a bit on reading those. not the dream, i know it was supposed to be like that, but the red room stuff. other than that, great stuff! i'm already halfway through the whole game, leaving mark's route last. excited for future updates!
Noway you left mark on that state for the cliffhanger 😭. His eyeeeeeee!!!!!!
is it okay to use the cgs/characters to make a fan version? if so then where can i find them?
The game's assets are not for personal use. Please make your own artwork if you wish to make a fan game.
could you give us a rough date on when the game will be finished? just your expectation? expectancy? idk the word i speak taco
each of the four routes is divided into six parts
we get one part per update
we are three parts in for Gabe, Ken, and Hiro
and five parts in for Mark
but some routes are divided into different paths
with Mark's route dividing on day 4 into a Mark path and a Simone/Ollie path
and Hiro's divides also into a Hiro path and an Atri path
based on narrative clues, it is safe to assume that Gabe and Ken's routes will similarly spit
we get about one part per update, and once the paths spit, it takes two, one for each path, and we get one update each two months
that means it will take 18-20 updates to finish Burrows depending on whether Gabe and/or Ken's route spit on day 4 or 5
which means it will take 36-40 months (around 3 years) to finish Burrows
damnnnnnn! thanks for the maths there, 3 years is a lot, but this project deserves that time, at this point this isnt even a project, its a master piece. take as long as you need! @nikko and the team ;)
I am hoping Nikko finishes the project. Since I joined this site in 2020, I have played 75+ VNs and only 4 were ever completed. More than 80% have been abandoned by unprofessional creators who couldn't commit to finish the project before starting another, or disappearing altogether.
weird thing I notice on the profiles about Gabe's ethnicity
he is listed as Chicano/Mexican American
he gets the Chicano from his mother but...
his father and grandmother are Peruvian, not Mexican
I think there was a mistake
He is Chicano culturally, but identifies as a Mexican American and would be a self-described American (born in the states) vs his mother (born in Mexico)
Is there a way to backup my saves? (Android)
nope, if you uninstalled the app, unfortunately everything is lost and you have to do everything again :[
Awh, well ig I'll have to reply it then (not complaining cause I fkn love this vn)
damnnnnn, the dialogue is so good, the part with ken and grey on the pool, nahhhh, absolute cinema. @nikko did you write all this stuff, how do you get the inspo and all that, its amazing, not only is it a poem, its a dialogue between two people, deeper than my love for ice cream, i need to know who writes the dialogues, where can i find the whole team involved in this?
Hello! I (Nikko) do the writing and artwork. You can find our team credits in the About section in the game.
Could someone please tell me how to unlock 3rd CG on 8th page of Mark's Route in Gallery?
I haven't been able to unlock the 3rd and 5th CG on Mark's page 8 also
I think it's a glitch
I surmised that these CGs are: Mark and Grey kissing in the elevator, and Mark giving Grey a blowjob (bloody version where you failed the time event during the monster attack)
to unlock the 5th CG on 8th page you have to pick Virgil toy while Grey is jerking off and pick to go see Mark while talking with Simone
it worked, thanks; you don't happen to also know how to get fragment 39? is the only one I'm missing
You're welcome; unfortunately I have no idea, it's the only one I'm missing too :[
I found 3rd CG on page 8, it finally worked when you pick "go see mark" while talking with Simone, and I skipped exploring the room, and as last choice while running from monster choose "Let him take over"
it worked thanks
you're welcome!! <3
i'm also missing CGs 1 and 2 from Ken's page 8, do you know where they are?
when you're playing strip poker with Colt and Jessie, you have to make Jessie lose, so he's the one who strips
thank you so much, if you wouldn't mind, do you know where I can find the following CGs from Hiro's route:
CG 6 page 10
CGs 1, 2, 3, and 4 page 11 (I believe these 5 CGs are a sex scene with Atri, I had triggered it once but can't figure out how to do it again)
CGs 5 and 6 page 12
all CGs from page 13
CG 1 page 14 (probably another whole scene I can't find)
CG 3 page 15
Forewarning: English isn't my first language, so I might make some spelling/grammar mistakes in English.
Very mild spoilers ahead, but its mainly about grammar.
It's nothing big, but I noticed a slight grammatical error in the beginning of Hiro's route. When the two unnamed german scientits speak, they say "Ha-ha! Hoffentlich er nicht explodiert wieder vor meinem gesicht", which gets the meaning across, but the proper way to say that would be to switch "explodiert" and "er nicht", to make the sentence "Ha-ha! Hoffentlich explodiert er nicht wieder vor meinem gesicht". The difference being the first one is a word for word literal translation, and the second one being adjusted for German grammar, as German grammar writes the verb before the subject. ill update this comment as I progress through his story with other German grammar errors.
Error 2: When Hiro says "Wenn Sie nicht gehen, ich werfe Sie raus". while the sentence is technically correct (for the most part, the same error of subject-verb switching happened at the end again), it translates to "When you don't go, ill Throw you out", which I guess could be the desired meaning, but I think its more common to say "If you don't go, ill Throw you out", which would be better communicated if he said something like "Falls Sie nich gehen, werfe ich Sie raus"
Error 3: When Hiro says "Mist! I-Ich Entschuldigung". This is once again a direct, word for word translation, which doesn't quite work the same in german. in German you don't say "im sorry"(at least not like that, the best way to say that would be "tut mir leid", which translates more to "causes me suffering"). you could say "sorry", or "sorry for me", which translate to "Entschuldigung" and "Entschuldigen Sie mich". the proper way to say what hes trying to say in this context would be either "Mist! Entschuldigung!", or "Mist! Tut mir leid". Either one would work fine in this context.
Error 4: When Hiro says "Was verdammt Sie machen hier, Herr Ratte?", which I assume is meant to translate to "What the fuck are you doing here, Mr. Rat?". outside of the same "subject-to-verb switching" error, the only other one would be that verdammt isnt used like that, a better substitution would be "um Teufels willen", which is a much more common phrase, meant to mean "by Devils will", similar to "um Gottes willen", which meant "by Gods will" (similar to the english phrases "what in gods name"). A better way to say what Hiro said would then be "Was, um (Teufels/Gottes) willen machen Sie hier, Herr Ratte?"
Error 5: When Hiro says "Ich muss sein negativ geladen. Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschluss den ganze Motor", which would be as if you said "I charged negatively must be. when I touch cables, short circuits the entire motor". Germans do a similar thing with descriptors, where the descriptors go before the noun. Anyways, the correct way to say the first sentence would be to say "Ich muss negativ geladen sein". The second one is a bit more tricky, as it does make sense, but isnt optimal. Theres two waiys to say that when he touches cabl;es, the motor short-circuits, Nr. 1 being "Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschluss ich den ganzen motor", which implies its his action to short cuircut the motors, and Nr. 2, "Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschlusst der ganze Motor", which would imply that it just kinda happens without his intention. id reccomend Nr. 2, giving us a final phrase of "Ich muss negativ geladen sein. Wenn ich Kabel berühre, Kurzschlusst der ganze Motor"
Error 6: When Hiro says "Auch wenn ich umdrehe Ladung, Kabel hat noch Elektrizität. Sie sind positiv geladen, Sie keiegen Schock nächster". The same mistake of putting the noun second is present in the first sentence, the sentence should be "Auch wenn ich die Ladung umdrehe, das Kabel hat noch Elektrizität". the second sentence is perfectly fine as far as i can tell, so the complete sentence would be "Auch wenn ich die Ladung umdrehe, das Kabel hat noch Elektrizität. Sie sind positiv geladen, Sie keiegen Schock nächster".
Error 7: When the Worker says "Der Chef sollte halt nicht versuchen, uns durch welche von seiner Art zu unterbieten". To be completely honest, I couldnt understand the second part of the sentence at all, and had to use google translate to understand it. Apparently its meant to mean that "The boss should not try to undercut us with some of his kind", which would be much better written by writing "Der Chef sollte halt nicht versuchen, uns durch seine sorte zu ersetzen".
That's all the ones I could find so far. I'm realizing now it might well just be a writing style choice to have Hiro make mistakes in German, but this doesn't feel like the type of mistakes someone would intentionally write into a characters speech. if I'm wrong, please let me know!
Hello! The choices to make hiro's German stilted/awkward were intentional. Not sure about the worker's speech, I had a few german speakers look at it and they helped make it sound antiquated.
Alrighty! Fantastic attention to detail in that case! There's also a solid chance that anything from the Workers that I marked as an "Error" could just be due to the difference in time period, or maybe even my own misunderstanding.